Haiku by Peter Lane (Nefyn, North Wales)

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According to Wikipedia, haiku (plural haiku) is a very short form of Japanese poetry characterized by three qualities:

  1. The essence of haiku is "cutting" (kiru). This is often represented by the juxtaposition of two images or ideas and a kireji ("cutting word") between them, a kind of verbal punctuation mark which signals the moment of separation and colours the manner in which the juxtaposed elements are related.
  2. Traditional haiku consist of 17 on (also known as morae though often loosely translated as "syllables"), in three phrases of 5, 7, and 5 on, respectively.
  3. A kigo (seasonal reference), usually drawn from a saijiki, an extensive but defined list of such terms.

In English, "haiku" is a term sometimes loosely applied to any short, impressionistic poem, but there are certain characteristics that are commonly associated with the genre:

My own preference is to add further colour to the words by using alliteration and assonance.

Petra

The Monastery
Sandcastles of rock
carved in Nabataean days
fuel Jordan's life.
Petra, November 2023

Halloween

Imagination
rain-soaked beneath a darkling sky
conjures fell horrors.
Nefyn, Halloween 2020

The Needles

The Needles
Jagged bird-topped teeth
erupt through sea, sun-baked blue -
beset by bum-boats.
Isle of Wight, August 2020

Blue Mountains

Swirling world of mist -
half-hidden panorama
humid tree-fern framed.
Blue Mountains, Jamaica, February 2020

Holywell Cabins

Holywell Cabins
All of a'glitter
city lights from blue mountains -
sunset rum and view.
Blue Mountains, Jamaica, February 2020

Kudu

Kudu
Spiral-crowned bush-king
hobbles from the waterhole -
soon to be bush-prey.
Etosha National Park, Namibia, October 2019

Gemsbok

Gemsbok
Double unicorn
displays his vee-shaped head-set -
the gem of the bush.
Etosha National Park, Namibia, October 2019

Elephant

Elephant
Old white-crusted bull
browsing with his faithful friends -
wows the waiting crowd.
Etosha National Park, Namibia, October 2019

Rhinoceros

Rhinoceros
A sudden shape comes
to quench his long-suppressed thirst -
dipping his curved horn.
Etosha National Park, Namibia, October 2019

Addis Ababa

The moaning muezzin
fills the air with fantasy -
disturbs my drowsing.
Addis Ababa, Ethiopia, February 2019
Thankyou - or better
ah-ma-sa-gi-na-luh-hou
in Ethiopia.
Addis Ababa, Ethiopia, February 2019

Geladas

Geladas
Thyme scents drowsy air -
sit quiet among monkeys
while time idles by.
Simien Mountains, Ethiopia, February 2019

Cladden Falls

Susurrating stream
etching rock with countless drops,
dancing down the cleft.
Cladden Falls, Gloucestershire, January 2019

Rabbit Island

Lazy sea meets sand,
retreats and rolls back splashing -
crab darts to harvest.
Rabbit Island, Cambodia, February 2018

Ta Prohm

Ta Prohm
Tortured-tree temple,
new roots opposing old stone -
carvings fall and fade.
Ta Prohm, Siem Reap, Cambodia, February 2018

Hang Sung Sot Caves

Hang Sung Sot Caves
Cool calcite caverns -
Frozen flutes where water flowed
Year on countless years.
Hang Sot Caves, Vietnam, January 2018

Halong Bay

Halong Bay
Wave-carved crags of karst
tow'ring tall through green-sheened sea - 
tree-crowned, plastic-plagued.
Halong Bay, Vietnam, January 2018

Hoi An Old Quarter

Hoi An
Lantern-jewelled lanes -
bustling business either side
tempting tired tourists.
Hoi An, Vietnam, January 2018

My Son

My Son
Time-worn teeth of brick
still close-fitted down the years -
ferns and moss bite back.
My Son, Vietnam, January 2018

Boab

Boab tree
Bulbous, ageless tree
clutching brown-skinned at the sky:
are you upside-down?
Prison Tree, Derby, Kimberley, Australia, August 2017

Emma Gorge

Emma Gorge
Cool secluded pool,
chasm under crumbling cliff:
hold until I go.
Emma Gorge, Kimberley, Australia, August 2017

Gibb River Road

Gibb River Road
Comfortable bus,
rumbling corrugated road -
blue sky over scrub.
Kimberley, Australia, August 2017

Argyle Lake

Argyle Lake
A lake laps the hills
where once winding rivers ran,
slaking sandalwood.
Argyle Lake, Kimberley, Australia, August 2017

Echidna Chasm

Echidna Chasm
With water and time,
a quirk and a crack in rock
slice sandstone slowly.
Echidna Chasm, Bungle Bungles, Kimberley, Australia, August 2017

Ceiba

Ceiba tree
Tree of Mayan life
rooting to the underworld
branching to the sky.
Tikal, Guatemala, February 2017

Tikal

Tikal
Stone-hewn blocks lie steep
in ranks built over the old
to heart-wrenching peak.
Tikal, Guatemala, February 2017

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